Always write thing things you don’t know how to say,

sometimes the wrong words come to mind and you can say the wrong thing, this can make a message translate wrong,

sometimes you just cant word something.

Start writing,

the emotions and details that you felt could never be said are all flowing so smoothly,

everything falling into its perfect place like a puzzle, things start to become clearer.

Finally it seems everything comes into place, but the puzzle will be boxed up once again to be figured out with every piece of your life.

Try not to lose any pieces.

 

3 thoughts on “The Things You Can Never Say

  1. kim881 says:

    Nicely done, Cassidy. I agree with what you say and love the puzzle metaphor. You might want to play around with line length, maybe add some enjambment and use structure by getting rid of some of the gaps between lines by writing or editing it in html. That way you can emphasise words and phrases. For example:

    Always write thing things
    you don’t know how to say.

    Sometimes the wrong words
    come to mind; you can say the wrong thing.

    This can make a message translate wrong,
    sometimes you just can’t word something.

    Start writing. The emotions and details that you felt
    could never be said are all flowing so smoothly,

    everything falling into its perfect place
    like a puzzle, things start to become clearer.

    Finally, it seems, everything comes into place,
    but the puzzle will be boxed up once again

    to be figured out with every piece of your life.
    Try not to lose any pieces.

    These are just my opinions and it’s your poem, so you should write it the way you want to. I hope I’ve made sense! Have fun and keep writing, Cassidy. The more you write, the more you edit and re-write, the more exciting and wonderful the poems become.

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    1. Thank you so so much! The more pointers I can get the better!

      Liked by 1 person

  2. shoniessky says:

    So true! I find I do this a lot. It helps. I think you’ve worded this beautifully.. everyone has their own way and I think you worded this perfectly.. xoxo

    Liked by 1 person

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